Snerd's game Reviews on Newgrounds

[Tiny Evolution Adventure]

Fun and addictive, but the hit detection is very off. I'm on top of a lower life form and can't just chomp it. I have to be some magic distance away.

AdventureIslands responds:

Updated the game with better bite detection, but the game takes some time to update.

[FUS RO DAH! button]

Great flash but...

... it made my friend Lydia fall off a mountain and now I can't find her.

onemanarmy675 responds:

+1000 bounty.
XD
Thank you!

[The Hearing Game]

holy shit

You scared the shit out of me. I was high as fuck and then that thing screamed. I almost had a goddamn heart attack.

Emby responds:

Aw man, that made me so happy. Glad you enjoyed!

[Stab]

I like this game

I think this game has a lot of potential. The controls are still a little messed up. Sometimes when you stab the guy, it does nothing to his health. I played the original version of this and I must say that you have come a long way with this game. Don't stop yet. It still needs a little improvement. I think if you continue to update it, that you'll have a pretty good game. Maybe you could add more detail like having to do a knife fight in the streets before you can advance to the stab arena. I wouldn't change much, but there are a few things you could do. Good game. I can't wait to play it when it's a great game.

- Snerd

Gurnz responds:

Thanks for your review, but I am sorry to say that I have no time for atleast a month to do any real fixing, because fixing it now would require me to redo most if not all of the script. But I am thinking of making a squel, maybe this summer, and Im planning of having some stabbing out side of the arena!:)....

[Snail Slayer Kill Hunt]

I liked it

I liked the cheetah one you guys at Clock Crew did, too. Technically, those are slugs. Fun game, though.

PirateClock responds:

the things they have on their back fell of as they were jumping around

[Grammar Ninja]

Your grammar was incorrect.

Sometimes, you had things included as verbs or nouns, but in other cases, you didn't count them. You didn't count "do" as part of a verb phrase. "Do" is part of the verb phrase. You also had "George Washington" and "United States" as two separate nouns. They are proper nouns and are counted as one word. I suggest you correct these. I'm an English major, so I suppose I can tell you these things without coming across as too snobbish. I'm sorry if I did. It was a good concept for a game, though.

KWarp responds:

I considered combining words like United States into a single "word" so to speak, but technical problems arise when the word boxes get too big. The correct circles and/or explosions obstruct the playing field.

I'm working to fix the grammar errors. Unfortunately that the only way to get the grammar right is to expose the game online prematurely so that people who know what they're talking about can point out the errors. No one seems to offer their help during production.